Although I have seen many partial eclipses – never before have I observed a total one. Although hundreds of kilometers away – the call was too strong to ignore. Got up early in the morning, put my gear in the truck, and off we went. After leaving Nova Scotia and driving through New Brunswick a flood of memories filled my heart. Last time on that highway, going the opposite direction, was John and I coming to Nova Scotia from our home in Vancouver. From the Pacific to the Atlantic, across our vast and absolutely beautiful country. Ultimately, it wasn’t the right move, but who would have known? As I drove through the forested hills I whispered to him – we are going back West, Babycake. I’m taking you back home … A dream, I know. But dreams are nice, especially on a long drive. After a few hours, already in New Brunswick, I entered the wilderness of a huge swampy Grand Lake and tributaries of the majestic St. John River. Right in there is a military district of Gagetown. I remembered that my father-in-law, Doug stayed there with his army unit. Because my husband, John, was born in Fredericton, then I think he might have been conceived in Gagetown. Very soon after his birth they moved West, to Calgary and Calgary was the city of his childhood and youth. He never had any recollection of either New Brunswick or Nova Scotia. Calgary was also the city where we met and fell madly in love. How strangely everything seems to be connected or have a reason. Just as the eclipse today. My first and most likely last total eclipse of the Sun – in the city he was born.
The weather was perfect on the shores of the big river. I located myself in a long, grassy field on the shore overlooking the old Downtown of Fredericton, between two main bridges. Right across from the massive building of the hospital John was born. There were already big crowds of people with cameras and folding chairs. The problem was trying to find a street where I could find a free spot to park my car. Eventually – I did. Someone gave me even a pair of special dark glasses for free. Enough of the story, though. The rest is recorded through the camera lens.
It had a very strange effect on my psycho. As the event progressed, the air cooled off considerably, and strange dusk set in, different in hue than regular evenings – I felt different, too. Suddenly the cameras and pictures stopped interesting me. I just wanted to be in it fully. It is hard to describe, it was almost subconscious. A realization that you are a part of the Cosmos. This huge, unending space that surrounds us. A tiny speck of grain.
Sometime during the seven years (1755-62) of mass deportation of all Acadians from Nova Scotia to Louisiana, a girl called Evangeline was deported, too. Whether her existence was a historical fact or a result of a mythical romantic story of love and death – we will never know. But we know that many ‘Evangelines’ must have faced that tragic fate. A story as old in the annals of literature as any tragic love story going back to times immemorial. When young lovers are torn apart by powerful forces of kings, gods, and generals unmoved by any cries or tears.
I have written here more extensively about the story and its background years ago. Have traveled almost the entire length of Evangeline Trail – a route she took on her way back from her exile in the marshes of Louisiana in search of her beloved. Almost the entire Trail. Yet, there was one, pivotal one, I have not visited. We planned to go there many times with my late husband but kept postponing it for various and absolutely mundane reasons. And a time came when my story become also a story of love lost and constant searches of memories of that love…
The other day, on a cold, wet, and windy Easter Saturday I went to the last spot, the pivotal spot, where Evangeline’s story began – to the little old town of French Acadian settlement of Grand Pré in Annapolis Royal Valley, close to quaint little town of Windsor.
The story was immortalized by no one other but the supposedly great American romantic era poet Henry Longfellow, who published “Evangeline. The tale of Acadie” in 1847. Never was an admirer of Longfellow’s style of writing and his literary testament. On the contrary, I see him rather as a mediocre talent. But the story achieved great popularity in the late XIX and the first half of the XX century. At a time of no television and relative seclusion of small towns in Main, USA and Maritime Canadian provinces of New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and Prince Edward Island. It was read by many generations. And thus literature became a fact and a legend was born. Like in ancient Greece.
I first became aware of the story more than 30 years ago, sitting in the foothills of Kananaskis Country, in my in-law’s home in Priddis, Alberta. Thousands of kilometers from the Atlantic. A wonderful great aunt Theresa Cormier was just visiting, a dame of different epoch, sister of my mother-in-law’s mom – Mimi McDonald de domo Cormier. Mimi and her sister Theresa came to Pictou in Nova Scotia from a French-speaking Isle de Madelaine on the St. Lawrence Waterway in Quebec. In her youth, she loved the story of Evangeline and read it many times. We talked about the romantic-era poets and as a result, I got from her the Longfellow poem and an old print of a small album of black and white photography of places and the journey of Acadians and Evangeline’s exodus. A little old printed album called “Evangeline Land” containing no text, but a lot of very old photographs of the entire western shore on Nova Scotia associated with the history of the Great Exodus – the military expulsion of Acadians (French-speaking and mostly loyal to their French king) from their settlements in Nova Scotia. What you would call today – an ethnic and political cleansing.
The day was not pleasant. Windy, and very wet. Nonending drizzle of snow and rain. I thought it was very appropriate for the occasion – somber, sad, cold. That’s how it must have felt for the Acadians when they were first beaten down in a surprise attack of the English. And how it must felt when ‘Evangelines’, their families were being expelled by ships from their homes.
Of course, it has a truly epic ending – tragic and glorious in Evangeline’s finding of her beloved Gabriel only to give him to the Death itself. But – to the defense of Longfellow and so many other authors of tragic love stories – love could be a bit perverted. Especially truly great love. The death of one of the lovers is followed by years, if no lifetime, of unspeakable despair and suffering. As if gods would whisper with irony – I will answer your prayer and give you great love, but be aware that the price for it is very high …
Dawno, dawno temu, za górami, za lasami (i tu należy dodać: za oceanami), żyła biedna wiejska dziewczyna, Akadyjka o imieniu Ewangelina. Akadyjczykami nazwano kolonistów francuskich w części Nowej Francji (marzenie króla Ludwika), którą właśnie tak nazwano: Akadia. Ewangelina mówiła naturalnie tylko po francusku. I zakochała się w młodym chłopaku, też Akadyjczyku, Gabrielu.
Ale zaraz po Francuzach w Akadii znaleźli się żołnierze brytyjscy. Ich król też marzył – tyle, że nie o Nowej Francji a o Wielkim Imperium, brytyjskim naturalnie. I zaczęli wzajemnie się przepędzać, strzelać do siebie. No i Anglicy nie chcieli nazywać Akadii ‘Akadią’ a nazwali Nową Szkocją. Nowa Francja, Nowa Szkocja. Strach pomyśleć, gdyby jakiś niemiecki Wiluś zapragnął też kawałka tego Nowego Świata, bo jakby on to by nazwał? Nową Germanią? Może Walkirią? Aż strach się bać, LOL. Ale było, jak było. Więc ci brytyjscy wojacy jednak przeważyli militarnie. W dużej mierze de facto nie potęgą brytyjskiego garnizonu, co wojnami w Europie (między innymi pod Sewastopolem, tak tym krymskim). Nic lub bardzo pewnie niewiele o tym wszystkim wiedzieć mogli młodzi kochankowie, Ewangelina i Gabriel.
Najpierw ich osadę w Grand Pré w Annapolis Valley zaatakował oddział żołnierzy brytyjskich i wybił wielu mieszkańców. W krótkim czasie lokalny rząd Nowej Szkocji zdecydował pozbyć się kłopotu z Akadyjczykami i podjął decyzje ich deportacji do odległej, obcej Luizjany, tysiące kilometrów na południu kontynentu. Taki los spotkał Ewangelinę i właśnie z Grand Pré ta masowa deportacja statkami się odbyła. Gabrielowi cudem jakimś deportacji udało się ominąć. Ale Ewangelina nigdy o wielkiej miłości nie zapomniała. Po latach i zapewne po heroicznej i strasznej wędrówce – wróciła do Nowej Szkocji. Z miejsca, gdzie wyladowała odbyła bardzo długą drogę pieszo lub przygodnie spotkanymi furmankami ze wschodniego wybrzeża Nowej Szkocji na zachodnie. Dotarła w końcu do Grand Pré. Jej ukochany dalej tam mieszkał. Ale radość była krótkotrwała. Gabriel był już ciężko chory, na śmiertelnym łożu. Miała jeszcze czas by złożyć na jego ustach gorący pocałunek.
Czy tą historię stworzył z własnej weny artystycznej Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, czy też spisał zasłyszane od innych wydarzenia, jakie faktycznie miały miejsce – któż dziś wiedzieć może na pewno? I czy to ma znaczenie? Nie, nie ma. Fakt jest faktem, że w przeciągu kilku krótkich generacji poemat Logfellowa zyskał olbrzymią popularność. Były to czasy wszak przed telewizją, radiem nawet i masowymi gazetami. O Facebooku nie wspomnę. Ludzie długimi wieczorami czytali książki. A w Nowej Szkocji i Nowym Brunszwiku naturalnie czytano to bodaj jak Biblię. Wszak to ich historia, ta Ewangelina i Gabriel to ich dzieci, z ich osad i miasteczek! W dodatku napisana przez takiego wielkiego i znanego poetę, jak amerykański Longfellow!
Ja trochę zawsze na przekór – historia piękna zaiste, romantyczna. Longellow był bezwzględnie znanym poetą – nigdy bym go do grona wielkich romantyków nie dodał jednak. Ponoć był pod dużym wrażeniem twórczości Adama Mickiewicza – ale Mickiewiczem ani amerykańskim ani kanadyjskim nie był w jakimkolwiek względzie. Tak, znał warsztat wersyfikacyjny dość porządnie. Więc bez wątpienia był dobrym rzemieślnikiem. Dość na ten temat.
Ja jego poemat i historię Ewangeliny znam od blisko 40 lat. Mieszkałem wówczas w Albercie, pod Calgary. Na farmie wynajmowanej przez rodziców mego męża, u podnóża pasma Kananaskis w Górach Skalistych. Siedzieliśmy bodaj na werandzie tej farmy i prowadziłem ożywioną rozmowę z uroczą damą poprzedniej epoki – ciotką Teresą. Ciotka Teresą Cormier była siostrą mamy mojej teściowej, Mimi MacDonald de domo Cormier. Obie siostry pochodziły z francuskojęzycznej wyspy Madelaine na rzece św. Wawrzyńca. I obie już tam, nim osiedliły się w Nowej Szkocji, rozczytywały się w poemacie o Ewangelinie. Ciotka Teresa była absolutnie zdeterminowana, że prześle mi poemat Longfellowa i że musze go przeczytać. Co zrobiła po powrocie do Nowej Szkocji. A kiedy widziałem ją po raz ostatni, podczas ciężkiej wizyty w Nowej Szkocji w roku 2000 ( ostanie tygodnie życia jej siostrzenicy, a mojej kochanej teściowej, Leony) obdarowała mnie jeszcze swoistym ‘białym krukiem’ – wydanym przez fotografa A. L. Hardego z Kenville w Nowej Szkocji, małym, czarno-białym albumem fotografii miejsc związanych z przypuszczalnymi miejscami w Nowej Szkocji i Nowym Brunszwiku, związanymi z Akadyjczykami i Ewangeliną z Gabrielem[i].
I ten właśnie skromny album zdjęć, w dość podniszczonej okładce, towarzyszył mi ostatniej soboty w drodze do miejsca, gdzie Ewangelina spotkała się ostatni raz ze swoim ukochanym. Sobota była dniem podłej pogody. Wietrznie, padał gesty drobny śnieg z deszczem. Wszystko było szare, smutne. Mieliśmy do tego miejsca przyjechać razem, ja i mój ‘Gabriel’ – John. Objechaliśmy razem całą Trasę Ewangeliny (Evangeline Trail). Planowaliśmy pojechać naturalnie i tam, do tego Grand Pré. I zawsze jakaś rzecz zwyczajna wypadała, że odkładaliśmy na dzień następny. Aż nadszedł czas, że już tego dnia zabrakło. Już pojechać razem nie mogliśmy. Tak, jak mimo wszystko w tych romantycznych lub antycznych historiach wielkiej miłości. Kończą się zawsze tragicznie. Im większa, im głębsza – tym ból i strata niewyobrażalne. Jakby bogowie faktycznie zazdrościli nam tego owocu, jakby szeptali uśmiechając się ironicznie: nie proś o rzeczy wielkie, bo może cię nimi obdarujemy ale za wielką cenę, która może być zbyt dla ciebie – człowieka – wygórowana …
Więc byłem w tą zimną, mokrą sobotę tam. I było mi dobrze, że taka podła pogoda, że żywej duszy w parku przy tym kościółku nie spotkałem. Był tylko duży pomnik Evangeliny wypatrującej w dal. Za znajomym brzegiem? Za Gabrielem?
I był obok, w drugim małym parku, wiele mówiący inny pomnik: kamienna grupa, rodzina – wypędzeni ze swych domostw Akadyjczycy pospieszani do wejścia na statek, którym miał ich wywieźć w jakiś ląd odległy, nieznany … Ostatnia w grupie była mała dziewczynka, bez zastanowienia się dlaczego i po co podszedłem i położyłem rękę na jej małej kamiennej główce. Chciałem powiedzieć: nie martw się, wszystko będzie dobrze, poznasz tam inne fajne dzieci. Naturalnie, że kłamałem. Zawsze w takich sytuacjach kłamiemy, bo nie wiemy co powiedzieć. A królom i prezydentom jest to kompletnie obojętne – przecież mają cały świat na głowie, więc gdzież mieliby czas by zająć się jakąś jedną małą dziewczynką?!
[i] Hardy A.L., „The Ewangeline land made famous by the expulsion of the Acadian farmers by the British Government on account of their fidelity to their French King, and afterward immortalized by Longfellow, an American poet.; oocihm.64903 (numeracja ‘oocihm’ stosowana zanim wprowadzono system ISBN), r. ok 1899; s. 76
Ostatnie być może tygodnie moich spacerów dziennych i nocnych od tylu już lat trasą głazów i krzewów między torami a wodą Kanału Bedfordzkiego, jaki ooddziela Halifaks od Dartmouth. Znam tu każdą krzewinę i kształt każdego bodaj kamiennego wielkoluda. Mam kamienne fotele, gdzie przy dobrej pogodzie siadać lubię i czytać, myśli spisywaś w kajecie, pstrykać portrety wody i nieba wzajem się przeglądające w sobie. Moje Kamienie. Niemi świadkowie moich radostek i mojego odchodzenia od świata.
It seems as if my almost daily walks – and nightly, too – on that familiar trail of rocks and shrubs squeezed between train trucks and waters of Bedford Channel are coming to an end soon. I know here every tree, every shrub, and shape of almost all the rocky giants. They form my rocky sofas, and armchairs, where I sit and read, gather my thoughts, and write them down in my notebooks, take pictures of the two solitudes: water and sky observing each other. My Rocks.
They have changed, too. It was a wild paradise on the edge of town. No one land left to its own survival methods. Austere in wintertime and splendid meadow in the summer: tiny white, yellow and violet flowers, a lot of birds in them, small trees. On one side deep water – on the other, a hill taken by a glorious meadow with berries and flowering shrubs. Suddenly, after the pandemic, everything changed. No, not the nature. People changed. Garbage was strewn everywhere, pieces of broken furniture as in a landfill, even broken shopping carts. When I walk now I pretend that I don’t see it, I look the other way or at the sky. I know that come summertime the shrubs and patches of the meadow will cover a lot of it. But it makes me sad. That was taken away from me, too.
Ale moje Kamienie też się zmieniły. A właściwie zmienili je ludzie. Świat uległ wszędzie zmianie na gorsze po tej strasznej pandemii. Nanieśli śmieci, ktoś powyrzucał połamane meble, jakiś stary materac. Udaję, że tego nie widze, gdy chodzę. Na nocnych spacerach udaje się to łatwiej.
A to taki magiczny ogród niesamowitości przyrody. Na kamiennym podłożu, u skraju miasta wąska przestrzeń zamieniona wiosną i latem w bajeczne dzikie łaki. Krzewy czerwone, zielone, pachnace słodyczą dzikie róże, krzewy wysokie czerwonych jagód, kraina małego ptactwa i wron. Jest tam kilka miejsc z rzędami drobnych i niewysokich białych brzóż – brzeziny. I zaraz wspominam cudowną powieść o tym tytule starego poety, Jarosława Iwaszkiewicza. I widzę chadzających tam i Stanisława z Bolesławem, i Malwinę i może grobek Barbary.
A dziś, na jednym z moich ostatnich tu spacerów? Mijam miejsce, gdzie po drugiej stronie torów, od strony miasta była po prostu niesamowita łąka. Wejść tam nie można było od dzikiej gęstwiny. A siedzieć można było przed tym zjawiskiem i godzinę, obserwując te wszystkie kolory fauny i unuszące się na nimi pyłki pszczół, ważek. Teraz przechodzę i widzę straszną jamę, straszny dól, jak lej po bombie. Maszyny wyrwały wszystko, rozkopały całe wzgórze. Będa widocznie stawiać tu domy. I pewnie drogie, bo frontem do wody i z widokiem na cały Halifaks. I zaraz na myśl przychodzą słowa z innej książki polskiej literatury, też mi bardzo bliskiej – z ‘Dzienników’ czasów wojny Zofii Nałkowskiej. Często zapis nowy zaczynała od owego: ‘i znów zaszła zmiana w polu mojego widzenia’. Zaszła.
Canadian Press is abuzz with stories about the Juno Awards, the Canadian version of US Grammy Awards. Well, not only the Press – the faithful public, too. Canadians have always been very loyal to our musical groups, and our singers. My John would have been delighted with it being hosted this year in Halifax and I would quietly bought a ticket for him a long time ago in advance of the event. He truly was a huge fan of our musical performers and knew them all. He was my teacher and my encyclopedia on this subject.
I must readily admit that I could easily name the best international operatic singers of the past hundred years. Starting with Caruso, Dame Nellie Melba from Australia at the turn of the XIX and XX century, incomparable diva Maria Callas (I am sure she is the reason the term ‘diva’ is still being used in popular culture to describe certain, shall we say, overly dramatic or tragic characters. Popular in LGBTQ circles, LOL. Even someone as timid and demure as myself was called that by few …. I know, hard to believe, LOL); great Joan Sutherland, Montserrat Caballe – forever associated in my memory with her wonderful performance with Freddie Mercury in their duet “Barcelona’, of course also Pavarotti, Domingo and Carreras – the original ‘three tenors’; Polish Ada Sari and great Teresa Żylis-Gara; our own Canadian mezzo-soprano Judith Forst, and Ben Heppner. Enough of that, otherwise I will never stop. But ask me the same about pop music names – the list might not be as long. I didn’t have to remember their names – I could just ask John! He shared that affection for popular music with his brother Roger, who is a good DJ’ and had his share of playing in the clubs. The two of them could talk about current music for a long time – and they did.
But back to business at hand – the Juno Awards in Halifax. The city is abuzz about it. Who and why should win and who shouldn’t. No, I will not tell you. That is a taboo to talk about rumors like that. You will find out in a few hours. Maybe you did already.
Well, the truth is … I simply have no idea, who is running this year and who should or shouldn’t. Ignoramus, tabula rasa. LOL. John is not here to educate me. But you are much better on this subject, anyway – I am certain. So – enjoy the Junos from Halifax! A few photographs on a very cold day in Halifax of the venue for the event – the Scotiabank Center.
The story is written in poetic verse, which is perhaps the easiest way to express emotions that are too intense to convey in normal language. I’m going through a difficult time as I prepare to make a monumental move, and I have to discard or abandon a lot of my belongings. Our belongings. This process has forced me to go through them all in detail, it has opened a Pandora’s box of memories. These are not just my memories: these are our memories.
Last summer and autumn, I often escaped to the beaches for days at a time to get away from reality. But now, with the sorting of our things, that heavy feeling of despair has returned. Despite the cold wind, light snow, and rain I had to return to the beaches. I had to try to find you again for a moment, if for a moment only. It seemed that by doing that I wanted to overcome the feeling of drowning. On this trip I kept imagining a theater stage and Shakespeare’s Richard III. Richard III with his desperate plea for a horse, his bargain with the Fates.
The phantoms of despair are everywhere.
Six, I think that I slayed. But not the one I needed.
A horse, a horse! My kingdom for a horse! I yelled, I begged!
as in a story said by English bard long time ago,
per chance, of dying Plantagenet with a blow to his head.
My kingdom for a horse! I yelled in powerless furry
at the ice-cold waves of roaring sea on Eastern shores.
I screamed, I raised my fists, and stomped my feet.
And words were taken by a wind
and silenced by another wall of deep.
I cried out in pain falling to my knees,
beaten down, with no sword, no horse.
and no shield – ‘just once’ – I whispered
with no sound leaving my lips – ‘for a moment
let me see his face again, let me tell him
without words that I do and always will’.
And then, resigned I turned away from the sea
and saw in front, in a fair distance,
on the crest of the sand dunes – human shape,
familiar form, protected by warm, thick cape.
I wanted to run toward him – but couldn’t move;
wanted to scream – but no sound left my lips.
And yet – I heard his words as clear as daylight:
I know you do and I do love you, too.
I have no kingdom and no need for a horse anymore.
No need for heavy swords and glory in the battles.
That chilly day on a windy and snowy beach,
with cold stabbing your bones as battleaxes –
that instance becomes as warm as paradise.
I went back home with a smile and a head held high.
Couldn’t get to my planned walk in Shannon’s Park in Dartmouth – a big padlock on the gate with an info “no winter maintenance’. Winter maintenance? Someone at the City Hall sleeps longer than the bears, obviously. I saw far away a gay walking with a dog and a beautiful deer hopping happily. Look around and noticed some of the fences were not too high. But there were other cars parked nearby and didn’t want to give them a bad impression – which obviously is a sign that I am getting old, LOL.
Walked around a bit and went back home. By early evening, just about as the sun started to get ready to slowly go to bed – I went on My Rocks. Thanks god no administration ever does any maintenance there – summertime or wintertime. It wasn’t a spectacular sunset. But it was very pleasant, soft. Observed a lot of waterfowl. Only once the sun get bored with his own nightshow and gave a spectacular solo. What a primadonna! LOL
What do you think of poets? Ephemeral creatures? A poet must be someone, who lacks persistence and discipline to write a solid novel? Let’s say five hundred pages long? Yes, you have seen, perhaps have one on your shelf big book by some poet you like. It is hundreds of pages long. Good. But such a book most often is an editor’s work of compiling, in some sort of order, hundreds of separate poems written throughout a lifetime. Generally speaking, a poet publishes a book (in modern times) that would be 20, 30, or maybe 50 pages long.
The times of huge volumes of Goethe, Mickiewicz, Byron, Pushkin or Chaucer are gone. Their work is generally called by a broad definition a ‘long poem’. They are still being composed by some – but hardly to the extent of times gone. Imagine one of the oldest known long poem by Abul-Qâsem Ferdowsi Tusi, a Persian poet in the X century, who wrote “ Shahnameh” – a poem of 50,000 couplets (two-lined rhymed meter). It is the longest ever written by a single poet in recorded history.
It is not only a strong talent but also a sign of unusual perseverance. Not very common in the XX and XXI centuries.
But – what is difficult for a mere man-poet doesn’t have to be too difficult a task for a woman-poet (women are generally much better in keeping their focus on goal than menfolk, LOL).
On a recent visit to a favored literary café in Halifax, I came across a huge volume of such long poem. The medium is mixed: regular-versed poetry and poetic prose verse. But all in the context of the same subject and telling the same epic (if ‘epic’ is the right term for such a subject) story. It is merely a booklet of … 1009 pages (one thousand nine). And the poetess devotes her talent to tell the story of … man.
I am talking of Anne Waldman. Waldman was (with Allen Ginsberg) a pivotal author and activist of the Beatniks movement in culture and counterculture of the 60. and 70s. In a way – a child of the Greenwich Village community of New York at a time of pivotal struggle with the Establishment. How many times have I longed to be there at that time! But a generational difference made it impossible.
Poets and artists who devote their talent to a cause that is larger than life give me wings to fly. I feel sorry for poets of ‘ivory towers’ or Parnassus’ peak. Their own glory and fear of missing the bus to immortality make me laugh.
Back to Waldman long poem, though. To “The Iovis Trilogy. Colours in Mechanism of Concealment”[i]. She spent twenty-five years writing it. That is perseverance, I must say.
Iovis is of course the epitome of Man. He is, formally speaking, an early Roman central god, an equivalent to Greek Zeus. The one, who looks after the order of humans. And the world of humans is the world of man. Period. Even lesser goddesses do not change that paradigm, that foundation.
Waldman does not detest men, a man is not her mortal enemy. She tries to show him that she sees his ways of trapping her-woman, of claiming her as his. A thing on the mantel. Necessary, needed. But never fully equal. Iovis is so set in his ways, that he might not even realize it anymore, he might not see the ways, the channels, roads that he built over thousands of years. They just are, aren’t they? A natural order of things: as trees, streams, mountains, and plains.
Right at the very beginning, she addresses him directly:
Dear Iovis:
Thinking about you: other in you & the way
You are sprawling male world today
You are also the crisp light another day
You are the plan, which will become clearer with a
strong border as you are the guest, the student
You are the target
You are the border you are sometimes the map
You are in the car of love
You are never the enemy dull & flat, dissolving in the sea
Illusion lay it snare, you resort to bait, to tackle me
Waldman states her case right at the beginning: I have a clear picture of you and your tribe – meaning the whole tribe of men – ‘you are in the car of love’. He lays bait and snare to make her-women his. To make her love him. It doesn’t change a bit any of these ancient roles, a fact that he too loves her truly. But it is her, that will become his – not the other way around. And she says flatly: our day is gone.
She admits the history of them, the ancient times going back to Sanscrit writings and dwellings:
As I say this to you, the furniture is rearranged in a sacred text
The room is now long, the room is tall, the room is male[iii]
It isn’t only the imagery of the past going to the beginnings of recorded history – the poet brings a throng of marching dead lovers, the ones that show themselves on ‘All Hallows Eve’.
It is a monumental poetic work. And, at the same time – it is very contemporary poetry. This comes as a surprise since the author submerges the reader in a tremendous history of humankind and human relations. Especially the love-friendship relations of men and women. She goes back to the origins of patriarchate, and uses Buddhist teachings to explain it, to uncover the lost or true meaning of that history. But it is a result of her actual time. Her time in that particular moment in Greenwich Village in New York and all that was going on at that time. Therefore the poem is also a political call ‘to arms’. To rearrange the furniture, if you will, of contemporary discourse and intersex relations. The man is not portrayed all the time as ‘an enemy’, ‘enslaver’. He too is being enslaved by his own actions. By the world of misogyny. Her long poem is sometimes compared to Ezra Pound or even to Dante’s immortal ‘Divine Comedy’ and William Blake prophetic books. I certainly would never go as far. Dante’s work is by any account a work of true genius and incomparable to her work. But, on the other hand, I have found her poem much better written and arranged than Blake’s strange and difficult-to-follow volumes. It is not an example of a literary ‘testament of time’. Indeed, it is very contemporary. Interesting to read – but I doubt very seriously that it will be red 50 years later or centuries later (as is still the case of “Divine Comedy”).
In the middle of her work, Waldman admits certain resignation, the impossibility of escaping raw emotions, raw needs, and desires:
Conflict, fighting for change is tiring, perhaps exhausting (je sui fatigue). The moment she does it – she performs a spiritual act of auto da fe, as Voltaire’s Candid. And an act of faith paid by violent death in the flames. Iovis explains that such an act is a:
It is important to notice the play of the words ‘trance Atlantic’ versus ‘trans Atlantic’. I will state again that in her poem, in the interconnectivity of her-woman with Iovis – everything is in a trance. Should I try to remind you of the contemporary context again? Who was not in some sort of trance in Greenwich Village by the end of the sixties? Certainly not many people among the artistic crowd.
I must say that I found the entire long poem amusing and interesting to read. Both by her poetic skill but mainly as a testament to the time of cultural counterrevolution in America. But my interest vanned somewhat halfway through the book. By page 350 I couldn’t go anymore. Went straight to the last chapter (which was very personal and interesting). If you have the time – I would happily suggest reaching for that volume. It is a good temporary poetry and an excellent example of that particular time in American literature.
And I do hope that Iovis has learned a good lesson and is a better man now. As a partner of her-woman. Not his-woman.
[i] Coffee House Press, 2011. Minneapolis; ISBN 9781566892551
the text is both:in English and Polish. But it is not a translation – both texts are different and independent of each other part of one story. It is often that I write my ‘talks with John’ in either of languages: Enlish or Polish. Sometime in one story, as it is this case. And I don’t want to translate either parts. It just has to be as it is.
Pojechałem dziś do ciebie. Nie wiem nawet, nie pamiętam czy pierwszy raz w tym roku? Kartki z kalendarza pogubiłem już dawno. Nie wiem nawet gdzie, czy na plaży jakiejś, do których uciekałem cały rok szukając cię? Może w tym forcie w Lower East Chezzetcook, forcie który z uporem budowałem odgradzając go kamieniami od fal i odgrodzonym małą zatoką z silnymi prądami wody od głównej plaży. Nikt tam prawie nie docierał nigdy, bo przypływ nagły mógł powrót uczynić bardzo karkołomnym. Więc była to jakby moja pustelnia, moje królestwo, gdzie spędzałem godziny. Czasem mogłem wrócić idąc, czasem musiałem wracać płynąc, jedną ręką trzymając w górze plecak z kamerą i zeszytem w którym spisywałem nasze rozmowy.
Straciłem dom, straciłem przystań, zgubiłem kotwicę. Moja łódź błąka się rzucana w różne strony świata falami dwóch oceanów: Wielkiego, zwanego ironicznie ‘Spokojnym’ i zimnego Północnego Atlantyku. Szukam wyspy, którą mógłbym nazwać ‘Nasza’. Nasza Wyspa nie jest wielka, raczej mała. Jak ta z przygód Robinsona Cruzoe i Piętaszka ma tylko dwóch mieszkańców. Wieczorami spotykam cię siedzącego na skałach ze wzrokiem zanurzonym w głębinach oceanu. Podchodzę i kładę rękę na twoim ramieniu. Odwracasz powoli swoją twarz ku mojej. Masz w oczach i na ustach spokojny, słodki uśmiech zadowolenia. Podaje ci rękę i pomagam zejść z kamieni. Kładziemy się na ciepłym piasku dzikiej plaży i patrzymy w niebo. Leżymy tak długo, aż nadejdzie noc i niebo zapala nad nami lampy gwiazd. Wskazujesz palcem najjaśniejszą i pytasz: Widzisz? To nasz gwiazda. Nazywa się Miłość. I zawsze będzie nam świecić, do końca wszystkich dni, do czasu gdy wyparujemy atomami kosmicznego pyłu i popędzimy obracać się po jej orbicie. Czy to nie piękne?
Biorę w swoją dłoń twoją i całuję ją długo. Odpowiadam: tak, to jest piękne. I odpływam w sen czekając na ten moment. Moment odlotu z Naszej Wyspy do Naszej Gwiazdy. Do domu.
Comes the day next. It is almost as if it was yesterday, yesteryear, forever. Our stars, our Cosmos came home to the dancing light of the sun in the waters of our ocean, right at the doorway of our home. And I walk to My Rocks on the shores and see them: the light of the dark sky of night, and the stars diving to the bottom of the sea with the dawn of day.
Seating on Our Rocks, on the edge of the water, I can see them sending shots of light from the dark bottom to the surface. They are there, singing our song with the sirens. They are tending to the Gardens of Coral, of swarms of dancing little fish, of translucent figurines of ancient sea creatures: the squids, the funny shrimps, and seahorses. All following the long pathway of Eurydice and Orpheus.
Our star, our island is there, too. The sky and the ocean are the same: the stardust of nebulas.
And suddenly I know it all. I’m certain that if I get up from My Rocks now and go home – you will be there as always: sitting on the sofa. You will look at me opening the door and you will say: finally you are back from your silly stars and ocean’s bottom. Sit here, next to me, and I will make us a cup of good coffee. We will watch that movie you wanted us to see.
I’m sure that’s what will happen when I go back home. I’m certain of it but also frozen in fear that I might be wrong. That you might not be there. But I will. I will go, open the door, sit on the sofa, and wait for the cup of good coffee. No one makes such a perfect cup of coffee, as you do.
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